User talk:Brihite/sandbox

Hi Bri! So I really liked your wikiedu page overall.The order of the paragraphs flow very well. I especially liked your second paragraph! So there is one or two things you might want to rephrase. So in the first line of the first paragraph you talk about epigenetic alterations and mention DNA methylation, histone modification etc. That line (at least to me) was a little bit ambiguous. It sounds like you are saying epigenetic alteration is like these things, rather than these things are examples of epigenetic alteration itself. It all does look really good! Best of Luck! Tara :)

Hi Bri. I think you did a great job explaining the different examples of epigenetic alterations and the research behind it that were mentioned in the Hallmarks of Aging. It was easy to understand and concise. However, I was thinking that you could maybe talk more about or hint at the research that's currently being done in this field since that's the focus of the second presentation. You did a great done!

Yukna — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ychhean (talk • contribs) 01:28, 21 March 2017 (UTC)

Comment on the updated research section
Hey Bri, Overall I really like what you have thus far. It is clear, right on point. There are little things I will like to mention the little things that caught my eyes. So the first line is very long. I don’t think, it is not grammatically wrong. But, I personally found it a little difficult to follow. You have two phrases in the sentence right now, may be break it into more phrases? Just to make it easier to follow. And if you happen to know the function of WRN gene, may be include a brief description in parentheses. But, I really like how you wrote the whole thing overall. The order of things flow well. Best of luck Tara Taraaaala (talk) 15:31, 16 April 2017 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Taraaaala (talk • contribs) 15:22, 16 April 2017 (UTC)