User talk:Brilelj0/sandbox

This article appears to be pretty well done. There is a good amount of information present on the page and it looks as though you were able to find a good amount of sources. According to your edit summaries, it look like you have gone through and checked your grammar. It does not appear as though you need to make any major changes. I would say just go over grammar one last time and If you happen to find anymore information that you think would be beneficial to the page, go ahead and add it. Besides that, your article appears to be well done.