User talk:Bringing bits to life

Your submission at Articles for creation: Project Manas (May 13)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Primefac was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Primefac (talk) 13:33, 13 May 2017 (UTC)

Your recent edits
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Thank you. --SineBot (talk) 12:29, 15 May 2017 (UTC)

Draft:Project Manas
I'm sorry, but this still looks promotional. My advice is to remove all but a lead phrased neutrally. This should then be sourced. You should proceed one sentence at a time, taking care to use non-promotional language, with a source for each sentence.Dlohcierekim (talk) 16:38, 16 May 2017 (UTC)

MfD nomination of Draft:Project Manas
Draft:Project Manas, a page which you created or substantially contributed to (or which is in your userspace), has been nominated for deletion. Your opinions on the matter are welcome; you may participate in the discussion by adding your comments at Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/Draft:Project Manas and please be sure to sign your comments with four tildes ( ~ ). You are free to edit the content of Draft:Project Manas during the discussion but should not remove the miscellany for deletion template from the top of the page; such a removal will not end the deletion discussion. Thank you. Dlohcierekim (talk) 09:21, 4 June 2017 (UTC)