User talk:Bristudent/sandbox

Things that you did well:

-Great use of headings that made the article very organized. It makes the topic and information very accessible.

-Good amount of links to relevant topics, that make it easier to understand more expansive knowledge on the topic.

-Definitions were very detailed and easy to understand which can give a great base to a person who does not know a lot about the subject.

-I really liked how you had many different theories that covered different aspects of the main topic!

Things that could improve:

- Use more description and information for each of the four personality types that explain a person's "arousal" level based on their type of personality. Perhaps having

a different section for each personality type would be more efficient.

- Use more facts in each of the three theory explanations. Using your own examples may not seem as academically valid as using the theorist's examples.

- Expand more on "problems associated with arousal". How does arousal associate with anxiety and depression? Instead of saying, "one study" in this section, state the

actual study.

Nicole & Julie Nicole Personality Theories 136.167.135.126 (talk) 01:37, 19 November 2012 (UTC)