User talk:Britgammon

September 2008
Your new article NASA e-nose looks like it's a cut-'n-paste from a news site of some type. You have provided a URL of some type (presstv.it/detail/aspx?id=68091&sectionid=3510208), but I can't reach it to see for sure. If it is, it is a copyright violation, and needs to be rewritten. If not, we at least need the URL to be fixed, so that we can fix the references in the article, and we need to rewrite the page so that it does not sound like a news article.

Please provide some references and fix that URL... otherwise, having no original source from which to work, the page will have to be nominated for deletion.

Thanks, MrNerdHair (talk) 06:24, 30 September 2008 (UTC)