User talk:Britkuckel/Amazons (to merge)

What you have posted here (which I moved to a subpage of your User page) is more in the style of a termpaper than a Wikipedia entry. You have not included any hypertext nor have you broken this topic down with subheadings. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a collection of essays. Please look at the changes that I have made and consider adding some others. While what you say is interesting, it needs to be made much more concise. I do not think this is ready yet to be posted in mainspace. Hoopes (talk) 00:05, 25 November 2010 (UTC)