User talk:Brittanyli/Slavery in China/Reuentahl404 Peer Review

I really like your work on this article! You have provided a series of useful information and organized them in a quite readable layout. I especially like the part you added to the leading paragraph which gives a much clearer explanation of what slavery in China means and the content word choice, as you've changed the original content "Woman Slaves" into "Female Slaves" and added a part to discuss the male slaves. Just one little suggestion, I've noticed that you have added the pronunciation of some of the words in Chinese, maybe try to add Chinese characters as well would make your article more stunning. Great job!Reuentahl404 (talk) 03:30, 30 October 2020 (UTC)