User talk:Brk2468/Endometriosis and infertility/Christiangarciah Peer Review

The diagnosis and clarification section clearly outlines symptoms, pathophysiologic mechanisms, and staging connected to endometriosis and infertility in a detailed manner which provides plenty of necessary information. I worry that some of the terminology and details might be too complex and advanced for readers without a scientific or medical background which could be a majority of the audience. Christiangarciah (talk) 18:50, 13 September 2021 (UTC)Christiangarciah