User talk:Brk2468/Endometriosis and infertility/Npondy Peer Review

- nicely organized management section with clearly organized subsections - it might be helpful to add in a step-by-step management plan of endometriosis: i.e., start with meds, progress to surgery, etc - i think the management section should be split into medical/surgical management and fertilization options, because it makes it seem like IVF is a management method when its a fertilization method - great job! Npondy (talk) 18:46, 13 September 2021 (UTC) npondy