User talk:Brodie21quinlan

Welcome!
Hello, Brodie21quinlan, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:44, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Relational communication theory
I moved your draft back to your sandbox because it isn't ready for mainspace yet.

I've linked to the Editing Wikipedia brochure. Pages 7-9 have a lot of useful information about the typical layout of a Wikipedia article. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:40, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
 * Your article has no inline citations, which makes it difficult for readers to verify factual statements in your article. Every statement should be followed by a supporting citation; if a group of sentences are all supported by the same source, you can place a single reference after all of them, but you need to have at least one reference per paragraph, and you shouldn't have any statements after the final reference in a paragraph. If you need a refresher on how to add citations, please consult this training module.
 * You need to create relevant subheaders instead of placing all your content in one big section. You need to break your work into paragraphs - long paragraphs hurt readability, and this is especially true when someone in reading online.