User talk:BrodyKRS

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Hello, BrodyKRS, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Your article is concise, it adheres to Wikipedia's rules of citation and non-biased language. It is extremely informative, thorough, and very well researched. My primary suggestion is to adhere strictly to Younging's Style guide. Specifically, to ensure the capitalization of 'Indigenous' in all instances (you'll find I did not correct this issue at all in my copyedit which Jessie may have forwarded to you). The second suggestion is to scan for and correct any awkward sentence structures and to watch for comma splicing and overuse - consider breaking sentences with many commas into smaller bites. Thanks for your admirable and hard work on this Brody! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ashley-Rae.CW (talk • contribs) 04:47, 8 March 2020 (UTC)