User talk:Broussky88/sandbox

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nissan_GT-R#Performance
 * Is this the article you selected for copyediting? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Josefhoracek (talk • contribs) 18:16, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Foreign_relations_of_Cuba — Preceding unsigned comment added by Broussky88 (talk • contribs) 22:37, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Approved. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:22, 12 February 2015 (UTC)
 * You added your sources the wrong way. You were supposed to add citations to the text - the sources then get automatically placed in the list of references. They way you did it made a mess of the article. You will notice other users have since cleaned it up, unfortunately deleting your sources in the process. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:31, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Article with a missing lead: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2001_Speedway_Grand_Prix_of_Denmark — Preceding unsigned comment added by Broussky88 (talk • contribs) 23:36, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
 * This article is a stub. You have no information to work with unless you do a lot of research. I recommend that you find a different article. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:34, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Okay. I see. I changed it to this article. Thank you. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2001_Major_League_Baseball_Draft — Preceding unsigned comment added by Broussky88 (talk • contribs) 00:56, 27 February 2015 (UTC)
 * The draft of your lead is a good start. At the end of it, be careful not to use empty superlatives (like "exceptional"). Maintain a neutral point of view. Instead, list specific names of the most notable players, perhaps even mentioning what they achieved since then. Let their statistics and awards speak for themselves. Add an internal link to each player. Josef Horáček (talk) 08:55, 2 March 2015 (UTC)
 * The lead should be placed above the TOC, with no section heading. It also needs some additional proofreading. Other than that, it certainly improved the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:00, 10 March 2015 (UTC)