User talk:Browan1/Misogyny in sports

Peer Review comments from Sunny Patel, 19:00, 21 November 2020 (UTC)

 * Recall that Wiki pages are supposed to be unbiased. I would recommend deleting "and today still dominated by men". Though this is true, I believe this statement brings some biased.


 * Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think you're missing citations on your Wiki Page. You can cite sources using the " icon. Hover over it and it should say cite. Just put the link and wiki will do the rest. Citations should be added at the end of the sentence. If you're paraphrasing info from the same source, you can cite after the last sentence.


 * I would recommend adding things in Pay Gap. I can see some discrepancies in that section. For example, you can add how much a male gamer makes in an Esports compared to that of a female gamer. The highest paying esports player is Faker with a multi-million dollar contract, whilst the best female player gets nothing close to that. I'm sure you can also find recent examples of women being paid less in the sports industry. Maybe in sports advertisements as well?


 * I've also noticed there aren't any citations listed on the wiki page as well. My recommendation is that you should create a references section with your citations added, then make a comment somewhere on the page to indicate the lack of citations from others


 * You could also add to the coverage in the media section. I would state how women in the esports scene get less coverage than men do. Not a lot of female gamers are highlighted than compared to men. If they are highlighted, they don't get the same treatment as men.

--Spatel137 (talk) 02:30, 22 November 2020 (UTC) Sunny Patel
 * I like your page overall. You make good points, just make sure you cite them. You can try to expand on some details as well.

Peer Review comments from Daisy Tellez

 * it is a very interesting topic where we can learn from. Thank you.
 * are you going to add the percentages to the representation section? I think it would be interesting to see those statistics. Especially in the format: for every __ men there are __ women.
 * you can try to add more examples of female athletes
 * my article is on the media portrayal of women. I was reading how women are used as background decorations. You can see it a lot in sports broadcasting. You have the commentators and women (half-dressed) next to the men. I think it is crazy how they still use ring girls in boxing and what they want them to wear. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Daisy012 (talk • contribs) 17:31, 23 November 2020 (UTC)