User talk:Brtneynguyen/Security Alarm

Article Review
Hi Brtneynguyen, I found your article to be very interesting. Some things I will point in your current draft are some minors grammar errors in the last and third paragraphs. When you add your references make sure every 3 sentences are cited by an article. If you want or have time I would go deeper into the advantages and disadvantages. Show the viewer how much they can cost and how effective they are through stories/demonstrations. For the article, you need an intro to give a more general description of security alarms, defined security alarms.Njtalaber (talk) 22:01, 1 May 2021 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi. I just wanted to inform you that I have peer-reviewed your content for the Security Alarm article. NatalieV10 (talk) 03:33, 3 May 2021 (UTC)