User talk:Bruce526/sandbox

Hi Bruce,

I like what you have so far, but I think you need to add more information and details.

Great start,NAdele (talk) 19:49, 3 June 2013 (UTC)

Comments
I like how you added a section on the contributors and talked a little about them. I saw that you were also going to add to the ethics and theology part so that will be good. I do not know if you are going to do this later but do not forget to connect some of the names and ideas to other wikipedia articles. This helps people that want to know more about a certain person or idea. I also do not see any citations but you may be adding those at the very end. Good job overall though. I like how you are improving this article! Chargerfan12 (talk) 01:47, 4 June 2013 (UTC)