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AfC notification: Draft:George Walther Sr. has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:George Walther Sr.. Thanks! Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 08:56, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Draft: george Walther Sr.
Roger/Dodger : Thanks for your suggestion. One of the granddaughters of George Walther Sr. who reviewed the initial draft also commented that she thought there was too much on the business, the Dayton Steel Foundry. She thought that much of the text about the business should be deleted to better focus on George Sr. I have deleted much of the business info so that the remaining paragraphs focus on the person George Walther Sr. As a new author I hope you see this reply Brucenc (talk) 04:38, 14 April 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: George Walther Sr. (April 23)
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Worldbruce (talk) 01:45, 23 April 2015 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:George Walther Sr. has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:George Walther Sr.. Thanks! Worldbruce (talk) 04:43, 1 May 2015 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: George Walther Sr. (July 5)
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Mr. Guye (talk) 03:30, 5 July 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: George Walther Sr. (July 23)
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Sulfurboy (talk) 04:13, 23 July 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: George Walther Sr. has been accepted
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