User talk:Bruneiwriter

Haslina Talib
Hello! Thanks for your edits on Haslina Talib - just a couple of notes 1) Neither Youtbe nor LinkedIn is not considered a reliable source, so please can you remove those references? (They could go in an external links section) 2) references go outside punctuation e.g. after commas not before, so please could you correct that? 3) References were added to the lead paragraph - but that's not actually required on Wikipedia, since that first paragraph is a summary of the rest of the text 4) headings only have a capital letter at the start, please amend 5) you said you removed some text - since it was referenced - please could you explain why? 6) Lots of the references now added are bare links - please fill these out as full references (there is a convert button if you hover over the reference in edit mode). 7) Just as a word of advice, if you have any previous relationship with the subject or their company this might be perceived as a conflict of interest. I just mention this as lots of new editors start with topics that are connected with. If you are connected this needs to be added to your user page. Happy editing Lajmmoore (talk) 06:43, 3 April 2023 (UTC)


 * Hello and nice to meet you! Thank you for your message. I found it really helpful in making this an even better article. 1) I've removed the Youtube and LinkedIn sources. 2) References have been moved after punctuations. 3) References have been removed from the lead paragraph. 4) Capitalisation have been removed from the middle of headings. 5) I believe that there was a mention of Ms. Haslina sponsoring a trip to Antartica. That was incorrect. She was merely the person who presented the token of appreciation. I also removed a citation containing an article that had no mention of Ms. Haslina whatsover. 6) I have attempted to add more details, but am not entirely sure if I did it correctly. Do let me know if the newest edit does not meet your approval and I will change it again. 7) I was alerted to this article by a friend who mentioned that there were spelling errors and incorrect information about Ms. Haslina. I am Bruneian and, as this is one of the scant few articles about my country, I do not wish us to be misrepresented, so I thought I'd try my hand at editing my first wiki article. If that is considered as COI, I humbly apologise and am open to other suggestions as to the next step forward. Bruneiwriter (talk) 15:34, 3 April 2023 (UTC)