User talk:BryantTalbot7/sandbox

I like the information you have here, but it needs to be much smoother. The structure is extremely choppy and just needs restructuring to sound smoother and clearer. I also cant see any of the sources you may have added so be sure to put those in your sandbox. Crweidman (talk) 07:29, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

I think all of your content is really good and reliable. Only other thing I would say would be to add some more details about each of your points and sources to lengthen the section overall. Mikemedina1 (talk) 14:56, 2 December 2020 (UTC)