User talk:Brynaelaine

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Problems with edit to Leonardo
I have removed your edit for the following reasons:


 * You jammed it between two sentences that were linked together in meaning and could not be separated.
 * The second sentence already informed the reader that Leonardo's works made a contribution to later generations that was only equalled by Michelangelo's (that is to say, it was an enormous contribution.)

To put it in a nutshell, you didn't read what you were adding to, either before or after you made he addition.

Also, while Leonardo did apply a scientific approach to his paintings, this was not the only important thing, and it was not the only thing that had impact on later generations of painters. The article that you quoted from emphasises the science of his approach, because the article is specifically about that aspect of his work.

But this article is not about his scientific approach. This article is about which paintings have survived, where the are located, and whether they are reliably attributed.

It is enough (in this article) to say that Leonardo's paintings have made a contribution to art history, without say that Leonardo's approach to the science behind the paintings has made a contribution to art history

Amandajm (talk) 07:42, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

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Amandajm (talk) 07:42, 21 July 2012 (UTC)