User talk:Brynneparkman/sandbox

The point you added is not in the original article. This is a very good job. However, I think you still have something missing. First of all, in terms of structure, you should add a title to what you want to add, and you should tell us where the position you want to add is in the original article. Second, in terms of balancing act, the original article lacks a lot of content related to the topic. I think there must be a lot of content behind this topic that can be unearthed, Thus you can find more information to enrich the original article Content. Third, in terms of data sources, you are missing footnotes and two other references, and I don't know which source your data corresponds to, so it is likely to be identified as plagiarism. Finally, I hope my suggestions can help you to complete the article better. Nanhezhu (talk) 01:35, 3 December 2020 (UTC) Nanhezhu (Tom Zhu)

Unsure which part of the article you edited or maybe you added your own section. Although it is very informative, I don't see where you're trying to fit it into the original article. If you used other articles and sources to write this information they should be cited in a references section. This is explained in the wiki training and is very easy to follow. Just a couple things should be added to make it more clear. 74.111.0.81 (talk) 00:09, 4 December 2020 (UTC)