User talk:Bryson jones/sandbox

The Lead
Added the wikipedia article "History of the New Orleans Pelicans" to the course homepage, claiming it as my second article selected for lead editing.Bryson jones (talk) 07:45, 28 October 2015 (UTC)

I recommend that you avoid editing medical articles until you become more experienced as an editor and get some medical expertise. The Pelicans lead looks very good, and you should go with it. Please proofread it first. There should be a single space following each comma or period. Also, there should be an apostrophe in the phrase "the Pelicans' season." Once you make these changes, you should post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:36, 1 November 2015 (UTC)