User talk:Bshields93/sandbox/new sandbox

=Peer Review= Hey Ben! I'm reading through what you have so far and it looks interesting, but there are a lot of parts that are missing and that I'm confused about? The article you listed yourself as making is The Tale of Mac Da Thó's Pig, but this doesn't seem to be the topic for this page, so I'm assuming that's meant to be your model article. I looked up the page for the Mythological Cycle and Tuatha De Danaan and there are pages for both of those, but I'm not sure which one is meant to be the main focus?

There is no lead that introduces the reader to the topic and that would be essential to include when making the article. There's only two sections, but both have have interesting information on the histories of the topics. I do not see anything that indicates bias and it seems rather neutral. However, there are no sources, which is crucial, especially for a more history based article.

Two big improvements I suggest: 1) include a lead to introduce the article and 2) source/cite it! Some smalls things would just be to look read over it and maybe add more paragraphs to separate ideas, which would make it easier to read. Also explain how both of the topics are connected! Jbalbz (talk) 00:27, 5 May 2019 (UTC)

More, more, more
Take your draft to the next level by: organizing content, writing up a lead, adding a table of contents, info boxes, links, etc. Profhanley (talk)