User talk:Bshy01/sandbox

Article evaluation feedback
This is an interesting article to evaluate for this assignment because it's fairly robust and I agree that it's useful to see and think about how a pretty good article that's this broad is organized. You point out some excellent strengths and valid notes for improving it here, and it's great that you point out some specific sources from the reference list that need updating. The one thing I don't see in your evaluation that actually speaks to at least part of your concern about bias and brand names is the set of conversations happening on the article's talk page. There is some very recent discussion there about this exact topic! Nicoleccc (talk) 03:49, 14 July 2019 (UTC)

Article draft?
Hey I'd love to review your article but I can't find it on your sandbox, only sources for it. Ohjeezewhy (talk) 19:19, 25 July 2019 (UTC)