User talk:Bthomas2/sandbox

Hey Bridget, The outline looks really good. Chris and I really enjoyed reading your article.

One of the strengths of your page is definitely the content and the organization of the content. You have some awesome information that covers a lot about attribution bias. Another part that we liked was your limitations section, which was a great addition to the page. Lastly, your knowledge of the in-text Wikipedia citations and shortcuts made the outline appear more complete and easy to navigate.

Some of the areas we suggest to improve on would be the addition of pictures throughout the article. One suggestion would be a picture of the Gestalt test. Also, the list of attributional biases appears incomplete on the page. You may want to add a sentence or two for each attribute, if not I would just keep them all as shortcuts so they are consistent. Lastly, the introduction section seems a bit long. With that being said, Chris and I think it would be beneficial to the page if you separated the final two paragraphs of that section into a section of its own perhaps titling it "Effects of Attributional Biases."

Hope this helps!! 136.167.247.36 (talk) 15:32, 16 November 2012 (UTC)Megan Murphy

Hey Bridget, The outline looks really good. Chris and I really enjoyed reading your article.

One of the strengths of your page is definitely the content and the organization of the content. You have some awesome information that covers a lot about attribution bias. Another part that we liked was your limitations section, which was a great addition to the page. Lastly, your knowledge of the in-text Wikipedia citations and shortcuts made the outline appear more complete and easy to navigate.

Some of the areas we suggest to improve on would be the addition of pictures throughout the article. One suggestion would be a picture of the Gestalt test. Also, the list of attributional biases appears incomplete on the page. You may want to add a sentence or two for each attribute, if not I would just keep them all as shortcuts so they are consistent. Lastly, the introduction section seems a bit long. With that being said, Chris and I think it would be beneficial to the page if you separated the final two paragraphs of that section into a section of its own perhaps titling it "Effects of Attributional Biases."

Hope this helps!! Meganmurphy17 (talk) 15:47, 16 November 2012 (UTC)