User talk:Buck baker/sandbox

Assignment 2
You shouldn't be using another encyclopedia as a source for WP. Your other sources look good. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:19, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

Assignment 3
From now on, this is where all discussions about class assignments will take place. You should still post the draft of the lead section in the sandbox, though. Is there anything else that needs to be done before you can remove the edit filter? Josef Horáček (talk) 05:19, 27 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Your lead is certainly an improvement. There is still some room for improvement - the first sentence should somehow include the crucial info from the second sentence - the fact that it's a film school. Also, you use semicolons incorrectly. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:04, 10 March 2015 (UTC)