User talk:Bucky 13/Jonathan Schwabish

This page is very detailed and does a great job of giving background on Schwabish. The order in which you lay out each of the sections flows well; the career section is especially impressive with how much detail you could find. There is very little I can suggest to improve this article; great job! One thing you could look out for is repeated sentence structure. Be mindful of getting repetitive with this structure, and think about varying it a bit. Overall, great work!

Peer Review Message
1. The article does well with containing enough information about who Jonathan Schwabish is and what he does exactly and the text on this page delivers a clear image that he is someone who has had extensive experience in his field along with the list of various publications to back that up. I also found the article to be well organized into their own respective sections.

2. For changes, there were not many I would suggest since I found the page to be organized and not lacking in information in any parts to the point where it is obvious. I had to make some spelling and grammar edits so as you are adding more information, I would only be cautious of that for your final draft.

3. I would say for more information, I would try finding more information on Jonathan's background along with his professional experience if it is possible to find more information anywhere online whether it be specific interviews or talks if there are any. I am not sure if we will get around to this too, but a photo for his page would also be good too and would complete the page.

4. Your wiki page is very organized and full of a lot of information, especially with Jonathan Schwabish's background and publications. It really does seem like you might have everything covered and I know that is something I will need to do for my page when I get around to editing mine again since there is not much detail at all on mine.