User talk:Bunnydew15/sandbox

Hello bunny!

Peer Edit
Overall the article is very good! I have two main points to add. The first is to add more sources and possibly external links to the Physician Assisted Suicide and Do Not Resuscitate sections of the article. They are both a pretty large (and very controversial!) part of terminal illness. Additionally, I think the psychological impact section may be reorganized to increase its effectiveness. As of now, the section seems to be short summaries of different symptoms, however, if they were more strategically grouped (for example, into effects on the patient vs effects on the family), it would make the section easier to digest. (Iimph2017 (talk) 15:51, 14 November 2017 (UTC))