User talk:Burgo Fitzgerald

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Speedy deletion of NetSPI
A tag has been placed on NetSPI, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be blatant advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become an encyclopedia article. Please read the guidelines on spam as well as FAQ/Business for more information.

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April 2009
Please do not remove speedy deletion notices from pages you have created yourself. Please use the template on the page instead if you disagree with the deletion, and make your case on the page's. ShakingSpirit talk 13:50, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

Re: NetSPI
Burgo, glad to see you're rewriting it :) Remember, the reason why it went last time were G11 (blatant advertising) and A7 (doesn't state notability) - A7 bares some explanation, as is doesn't mean the subject isn't notable, but that the article doesn't state why it is - i.e., why do we care about NetSPI? What makes them worth a wikipedia page? As long as you sort both of these, even if your article is short and without many sources, you can still create it in mainspace - maybe tag it with a stub tag and/or and you'll be safe from speedy deletion, and well on your way to writing a great encyclopedic article! Which you can improve from there :) If there's anything I can help with, let me know. ShakingSpirit talk 19:09, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

Articles for deletion nomination of NetSPI
I have nominated NetSPI, an article that you created, for deletion. I do not think that this article satisfies Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion, and have explained why at Articles for deletion/NetSPI. Your opinions on the matter are welcome at that same discussion page; also, you are welcome to edit the article to address these concerns. Thank you for your time.Please contact me if you're unsure why you received this message. Oscarthecat (talk) 21:35, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of NetSPI
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I think the copyright violation notice is in error. Presumably Wikipedia noticed that some of the text of this revised article is the same as that of a previous version. But all the text is original. I have rewritten the article to address other objections, notably NPOV. I think the revision addresses those objections. Burgo Fitzgerald (talk) 20:34, 20 June 2009 (UTC)Burgo FitzgeraldBurgo Fitzgerald (talk) 20:34, 20 June 2009 (UTC).


 * The article was previously nominated for deletion, it still appears non-notable and written like an advert unfortunately. --Oscarthecat

(talk) 20:42, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

I am puzzled by the assertion that the article does not meet the notability standard. There are Wikipedia articles on other consulting firms that do similar work, e.g., nCircle. My article describes the importance of the work done by NetSPI and others in ensuring that organizations comply with various security standards. Without such compliance certifications, the organizations simply would not be able to operate. Moreover, the article was written with a journalistic objectivity; it is definitely not written in the style of an advertisement: it makes no claims of superiority, for instance. It just states what the consultants in the company do,in a way similar to many other articles about companies. Burgo Fitzgerald (talk) 20:32, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
 * The earlier version of the article was reviewed by multiple editors who found it unsuitable. If you fancy rewriting it, perhaps in your user-space WP:USERFY, I'd be happy to help review it for you. --Oscarthecat (talk) 06:02, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Oscar, Thanks for the message. The revised article, I thought, addressed the objections of Shaking Spirit, who was the only other reviewer I was aware of besides yourself. I would be happy to rewrite it. Can you move the article to my user-space? But before I can rewrite it I need to understand the objections about being non-notable and about being written in the style of an ad. It seems to me that the revised article discusses the importance of the work done by NetSPI (notability) while maintaining a neutral point of view. I have written dozens of press releases and am familiar with journalistic standards for objectivity. Burgo Fitzgerald (talk) 22:18, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

Oscar, I am not sure if this revised article is "userfied" or not. I intended to put this on my user page for review. See http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Burgo_Fitzgerald. In any case, this revision has several additional internal and external links, which I hope sufficiently address the notability criterion. I also went through the text and I do not find any wording that could be seen as puffery. All the statements made about NetSPI are factual and supported by frequent references. If there are statements made here that you object to, please identify them. Thanks for your help. Burgo Fitzgerald (talk) 16:56, 26 June 2009 (UTC)


 * It was userfied ok, but at wrong location, I've moved it to User:Burgo Fitzgerald/NetSPI, hope you don't mind. I've also posted a Request For Comment for it at Requests_for_comment/Economy,_trade,_and_companies --Oscarthecat (talk) 07:23, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

Oscar, Thanks for the assistance.Burgo Fitzgerald (talk) 20:39, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

Oscar, what is the usual time period for RFCs? Burgo Fitzgerald (talk) 21:02, 6 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Wow, still no feedback. If you think the article meets the notability criteria then suggest you repost it at NetSPI. --Oscarthecat (talk) 21:52, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

I have posted a revised article on my userpage, User:Burgo Fitzgerald/NetSPI. I think it has an NPOV, and I know it has some added references that I think strengthen the case for notability. Burgo Fitzgerald (talk) 17:14, 2 October 2009 (UTC)

You might want to try using Article Incubator. After which you can submit it to WP:DRV. Until you've at least gone through DRV you should not try to re-create it in article space or it will be speedy deleted. Though if a company doesn't meet our notability guidelines, no amount of editing will make any difference.--Otterathome (talk) 19:03, 7 October 2009 (UTC)

NetSPI
It still needs a lot of cleanup. Look at the way references are done on the other articles. Gigs (talk) 21:51, 19 October 2009 (UTC)

Gigs, I reformatted the references the way that QuietMove has done them. Please let me know if this is OK. Thanks. Burgo Fitzgerald (talk) 20:10, 20 October 2009 (UTC)


 * Try this link Gigs (talk) 21:46, 20 October 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Gigs. I used the MLA style for the references. Shades of graduate school. Burgo Fitzgerald (talk) 16:46, 21 October 2009 (UTC)

The DRV guidelines say that it is preferable to work with the editor or administrator who deleted the previous version of an article, so that's what I am doing.Burgo Fitzgerald (talk) 16:34, 9 November 2009 (UTC)

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AfC notification: Draft:Crelow has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Crelow. Thanks! SwisterTwister  talk  05:31, 20 March 2016 (UTC)

Nomination of NetSPI for deletion
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article NetSPI is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

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Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. Toddst1 (talk) 19:33, 12 July 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Crelow


Hello, Burgo Fitzgerald. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Crelow".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 (talk) 05:09, 16 January 2017 (UTC)