User talk:Burke2jf/sandbox

With the "History" heading for this article, I am going to help organize the stories that are given because they are sometimes taken out of context and this breaks the reading flow of the article. Under the "Research" heading there are a few stories or litigations that aren't elaborated on or given in full detail which takes away from the argument that is trying to be made. There is a random chart in the middle of the article that shows lists of concussions from other sports that are neither in America or NFL related which is totally against the title of the article. Also there are some figures and statistics that aren't related to professional football in America which need to be deleted because they do not add to the main argument of the article. The overall organization of this article is totally messed up because during one area the article speaks on the litigations in the NFL and concussion protocol then switches to stats and figures that aren't even affiliated with the NFL. As well as talking about the Canadian Football League. Burke2jf (talk) 16:18, 29 October 2018 (UTC)