User talk:Bushfan9332

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Megan Fox article
As I stated in my edit summary, you did good work in cleaning up this article's lead (intro). I cut down on part of this lead some days ago. It was almost like her entire Personal life section was in the lead, LOL. That definitely needed to go, and so I did that after addressing it on the talk page first.

Anyway, after looking at and judging by Fox's Awards section, she has not won several awards anyway. Thus, I tweaked that part even further from where you tweaked it. I added back the mention of Teen Choice Awards (without referencing to IMDb) but with the addition of MTV Movie Award as well, because we should specify what types and in a way that does not give the impression that several, very distinct types of awards have been given in this case. I also specified that these are nominations (though she has won one thus far). This is sourced to IMDb in her Awards section, and does not really have to be sourced in the lead due to that. I know that IMDb is typically not regarded as a reliable source here at Wikipedia, but even so, it is still typically used around here for award and film information and is seen as reliable in those cases. Flyer22 (talk) 07:16, 26 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Another good tweak by you to the lead section; for some reason, the fact that she was not nominated for various MTV Movie Awards did not loudly resonate for me when adding MTV Movie Award alongside mention of her Teen Choice Award nominations. I feel that this is because by "various Teen Choice and MTV Movie Award nominations," I was more so focusing on the "nominations," part: I was referring to the fact that including the MTV Movie Award nomination, she earned various nominations for the role.


 * No, I'm not going to comment on your talk page every time I like your edits, LOL; it is just that I wanted to state thank you for correcting my tweak, though late, and for your strive for accuracy. Flyer22 (talk) 09:23, 21 October 2009 (UTC)