User talk:Butterflyangelblue/Best Place at the Historic Pabst Brewery

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Various problems:
 * 1) There is nothing here to indicate that this is in any way a notable business.
 * 2) The information is mostly derived from the subject's own websites and publicity
 * 3) The tone is shameless promotional, and would probably get the article killed if you tried to publish it. -- Orange Mike  &#x007C;   Talk  01:50, 11 March 2011 (UTC)