User talk:Butterfy215/sandbox

This is looking very good. Instead of a bibliography, I recommend you incorporate your references into your draft. This will make it easier when you begin to edit the main article. I like the scope of what you're doing: it seems to be focused, yet it will still add significance to the main article. Keep working! -Grlucas (talk) 18:31, 7 November 2017 (UTC)