User talk:Bvass54/sandbox

Hello Bvass54,

I like where you are going with your article edits. You made it easier to understand and is a great introduction to the article. I assume you plan on adding your citations where they are on the edit you undid on the actual article, which seem to be good. I would suggest that you add more to the structure section, maybe outline the anatomy of some of the things you talk about in function section. Ive found a few articles with some information about the anatomy of oxyphil cells.(Potential Source)The function section you added is great, maybe just remove some filler words. Some of the sources that I am assuming you are adding are hard to find. I don’t believe you need so many sources, it looks some articles have enough information needed for this article. I think if you clean that up you will be good to go. I also think its possible to add a disease section to the article since oxyphil cells have been linked to play a role in thyroid disease. Overall great work on your additions! --Biologymajor4541 (talk) 11:13, 7 December 2020 (UTC)