User talk:Bwallace10/sandbox

Article evaluation
Brandon, this is a very thorough summary, but it looks like you read the Week 3 instructions. Go back and complete the Week 2 work, if possible. Kquave (talk) 18:48, 11 September 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
I think you did a great job adding a substantive amount of text with credible citations to the article. All of the citations you have are valid and neutral. I think it's important that you clearly interpreted the importance of Brown vs. Board of Education and its contribution to institutional racism. If you want to be even more thorough, I would do more research regarding the social implication so institutional racism and its effects on social aspects of society, rather than the legislative and political implications. Intertwining experience makes the article contribution even more credible due to the fact that its backed up with viewpoints beyond written/passed legislation. I would add on a subsection titled "Social Effects of Brown vs. BOE" for instance. Rainalaine (talk) 19:40, 21 October 2018 (UTC)