User talk:Bwiffen1234/sandbox

Mollie Wilson’s Peer Edit on Brittany’s Article
- The facts presented in the article are straightforward and provide good insight on education in Afghanistan - Provide insight on what acts of violence are occurring as well as what regions these acts are occurring in. - I would create two different sections for talking about children in general and then talking about girls specifically as they are affected by conditions in the region. Mollie louiseee (talk) 23:19, 18 October 2018 (UTC) mollie_louiseee

Thank-you for the great suggestions. I will ensure to complete two different sections for both of those topics. Bwiffen1234 (talk) 23:22, 18 October 2018 (UTC)