User talk:Bxagon/sandbox

From: User - StudentAccountNEU123

What does the article (or section) do well?


 * Clear and concise titles for each section.


 * The sections that you plan on adding give more cultural and historical depth to the original article, especially when discussing recent events in history like BLM protests, contemporary American politics, and COVID.


 * Criticisms sub-section was articulate, easy to read, and just the right length.

What changes would you suggest overall? What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution?


 * Regarding the sections that you plan on adding to the original article, where will they be placed in the original article? Will they be at the end of it or woven throughout the original sections? Depending on how you decide to do it, the last section of the original article “In transition,” can seem misleading because it's regarding the year 2009. Maybe you could change the title or update the section?


 * Add pictures of crafts that pertain to each section.