User talk:C.McGaw/sandbox

Martial Edits
The last sentence in the "significance" section is worded oddly, I feel like. Consider re-wording it. All in all, I like the article. It's to the point, and gives good information. Work on getting your pictures up, and also consider finding more references. I know it's tough when your topic pretty much is covered by what you've already found. Even if you find more sources that agree with these sources that you've already found, that would be good. Lastly, check other student's references sections and model yours after theirs. You don't need anything down there except for the ref list command. Mmorr42 (talk) 19:21, 13 October 2014 (UTC)

Comments from Graeme Bartlett
Graeme Bartlett (talk) 10:46, 25 October 2014 (UTC)
 * I would like to see a diagram of the tectonic structure, showing the nascent Iapetus Ocean. Perhaps a cross section will help also.
 * On your map I would like to see Anadarko Basin, Wichita Mountains, Ouachita orogeny and Hardeman Basin.
 * Pennsylvanian is a subperiod or subsystem, not an era. The era is Paleozoic
 * An unusual number of petroleum wells is probably not the result of the igneous rocks, so this bit needs clearer explanation.
 * The see also section is redundant as everything is linked in the text, as is desirable.
 * I suppose I would like to see double the amount of text and references, as I expect there is more to say about it.