User talk:C.lof22/Mortuary archaeology/Amh285 Peer Review

Hi there! Your article looks very interesting but does not appear to be edited yet. It seems like "Burial Excavation" and "Creating a Biological Profile" are the two major sections of this article. I feel like the importance of these sections could be highlighted more in the lead because it does not really explain why these aspects of mortuary archaeology are so prevalent. The term "conflict archaeology" is mentioned once in the lead but is not elaborated on anywhere else in the article. I feel like the article could benefit from a subsection defining conflict archaeology and how it relates to mortuary archaeology.

The biological profile section of the article is much more detailed and elaborate which I feel creates an imbalance between that section and the section on burial excavation. Maybe more information could be added to the burial excavation section in order to make the article seem more balanced. The sources for this article are somewhat diverse but there are many authors that are cited multiple times. The sources are relatively recent (2002-2011) but I feel that if even more recent, diverse sources could be found the article would benefit from it. Amh285 (talk) 21:52, 26 October 2020 (UTC)