User talk:CBGaus13/Proctocolectomy

Peer Review
This is a difficult topic to understand if you are not in the medical field and I think you've done a great job breaking it down to be more understandable. The information included is relevant and up to date. The flow is great and the citations are appropriate. I especially like the first reference you have as it contains great pictures that demonstrate the anatomy and procedure. One thing I might suggest is putting the website citations in AMA or MLA formatting. The readability on the flesch kincaid scale was a 13.1 meaning it is more of a college reading level. One place where this could be improved may be putting the explanation of what a "colectomy" is in parenthesis after the word. The term "fecal incontinence" may also be difficult to understand. Again, this is a difficult topic to put into layman's terms, so I understand the challenge in making this a high school level article. Overall, this looks great so far!

Emyrick (talk) 01:21, 4 March 2024 (UTC)