User talk:CBuiltother/Occidental Petroleum Financial performance

I would leave financial performance out because it may be misconstued as adverstising for Oxy. Do other companies have similar sections?Tinlash (talk) 03:44, 23 December 2010 (UTC)
 * I took the British Airways article as my model here, particularly because it's one of the better-rated articles under WikiProject Companies. Sainsbury is another example with a table. --CBuiltother (talk) 03:59, 23 December 2010 (UTC)
 * I say put it in then. Looks good. Tinlash (talk) 22:47, 23 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Agreed, it looks good to me too. I have just made some minor comments, which can be seen by comparing the current version with the version two prior.Rangoon11 (talk) 00:18, 28 December 2010 (UTC)
 * Great, thanks! --CBuiltother (talk) 15:01, 5 January 2011 (UTC)

I would make sure that the text stays away from jargon as much as possible: "At year-end 2009" -> "At the end of 2009". Is there a way to avoid saying "market capitalization" three times in a row? Make sure to add a wikilink to that phrase as well. But really, these are just picky things, I think that the section is fine in terms of COI. --Danger (talk) 09:11, 23 January 2011 (UTC)