User talk:CCSPrincipal

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Craigmore Christian School
G'day. I gather that you're the principal of Craigmore Christian School?

I have your school's article watched (i.e., I'm notified of changes to it in case there's any vandalism and such) so I noticed your recent edits to the page.

Even noting your rewrite, I've decided to remove the whole Discipline section. What you wrote read as if it was written for a brochure. Content on Wikipedia has to be neutral in it's language. Word choice such as "our community" ("our" would be wikipedia when used on the wikipedia website) and "caring" ("caring" relative to what, and how is it measured?) are problematic in this respect. The relevant wikipedia policies here are: WP:COI (critically), WP:NPOV, and WP:PROMOTION.

It looks like you want to move forward from the language used in regards to the previous policy, so reverting back to that version wouldn't be appropriate. Beyond saying that the welfare policy is in review, I can't think of a new, better wording, so it seems we're left with removing the section, for now.

Once you've completed your review of your welfare policy, I'd be happy to help with writing up a new section. Of course, in the meantime I'm happy to help out wherever you need help as well. Leave a message on my talk page. Cheers. - danjel  (talk to me) 05:21, 11 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Just so it's clear, I had no problem with your other edits [] and []. - danjel  (talk to me) 05:29, 11 March 2011 (UTC)