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Peer Review
The expansion on the original article was done well. In the expanded methods section, I would suggest giving a better overview of the typical methods of apothecaries as an introduction and then elaborating. I would also consider renaming the section because it makes it seem as though this section would detail alchemical methods of some sort rather than her style of communication and medical practice. I would also suggest moving some of the information concerning her father and life from the methods section into the life section rather than the methods section. KatieEgger (talk) 23:02, 18 November 2017 (UTC)

Methods
I am looking for info on the methods used by apothecaries in different time frames Trial and error were the main source or finding successful remedies, as little was known about the chemistry of why certain treatments worked. For in stance, it was known that drinking coffee could help cure headaches, but the existence and properties of caffeine itself was still a mystery. <ref

A lot of modern apothecaries tend to focus on herbal infusions. This is a little out of scope for my intended additions, but is still important information. Perhaps I could add another section on modern day apothecaries?

Peer Review The expansion on the original article was done well. In the expanded methods section, I would suggest giving a better overview of the typical methods of apothecaries as an introduction and then elaborating. I would also suggest moving some of the information concerning her father and life from the methods section into the life section rather than the methods section. KatieEgger (talk) 23:02, 18 November 2017 (UTC)