User talk:CJones UG/sandbox

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Trade_agreement

This article has some good information on trade agreements but it does not state the three different types of trade agreements, that go over the specific ways that people use them for their governments. I think this would be useful information to put into the article, because i find it very interesting how different nations use trade agreements to supply for their countries.

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The First thing that i have noticed in the first draft is that it was did not meet the word count requirement, i am not faulting you for this because you are probably still working on your draft. Another thing i noticed was that the original article for Trade Agreement covers a lot of things but it does not cover your topic that intertwined with the rest of the article which is great in your sake because you can put a lot more content on this page. The first positive is in the first paragraph you technically do not have to redefine what trade agreement is because it was already done for you in the original Wikipedia page but the way you redefined trade agreement i believe was better then the original on the page. It was easier to understand what trade agreement was in my opinion.One thing i recommend is researching more on trade agreements so that you can just put your second and third paragraphs together. what i mean by that is the second and third paragraphs defining exports and imports should just merge with the introduction to leave you space to talk about its back history or statistics. I really think you can put a lot more into your sections on the three types of trade agreement, this is a component that will make this Wikipedia page a lot better. You can definitely add a lot more to these three paragraphs, another thing is that there are not any references or citations included. Maybe you plan on adding them later but this is something very important that you should have. Another Way to beef up the content in your draft is basically just adding on from what already said like instances where a bilateral agreement was the perfect solution or if it has never work. You can make this page a lot better all you have to really do is do some more research and get some references and you will be fine. Omartall90 (talk) 20:01, 26 March 2018 (UTC)omartall90