User talk:CMTucker/Sandbox

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This is a nice start! Here are a few thoughts for possible improvements:


 * 1) You might consider renaming the section titled "History of the Internet Kill Switch ...", as it provides context more than a history of the debate. Maybe "Background policies ..." or "Context ..."?


 * 1) In the section "Criticisms ..." maybe you should replace "John Stewart" with "Media criticism" because you also talk about CNN.


 * 1) Initially, I thought that putting the policy issues section first might create a better flow, but there are also good arguments for keeping it the way it is.

--JMBauer (talk) 17:31, 30 April 2011 (UTC)