User talk:CPHanic

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Hello, CPHanic, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Article peer review
Hello CPHanic, I enjoyed your article. I think it was well written, with a few spelling and double word use but otherwise, I think that it flowed, was neutral and informative. Since this is the first draft I am sure it will finish perfectly. I did not make any changes to your article as I am not sure how this peer review is suppose to actually work. I think once your go over the article again you will see for yourself, since your writing is pretty clear and flows. The only thing that I did not get until I reviewed the whole page was what the heading content meant specifically - I would maybe change that to say Content - Chapter review or something that indicated that the next set of information was going to be a breakdown of the book chapter by chapter. I would also maybe include a photo of the book cover and or even of the author. (Zenobia2021 (talk) 18:53, 23 November 2021 (UTC))