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Help me!
Please help me with... I am the Administrator to my supervisor, Dr. Mark O.M. Tso. I have created a Wikipedia page for him with his accomplishments. His page has been flagged on several occasions. I am not a pro at creating pages and would like to ask for assistance in fixing his page to eliminate the constant error messages. I have removed his published references and have begun the process of re-adding them with citations. Apparently, I have done it incorrectly.

Please advise me on how to proceed. I am tempted to delete the page but wanted to ask for your kind help before doing so.

Thank you in advance for your feedback in creating a more functioning Wikipedia Page for Dr. Mark O.M. Tso. Regards,

CRobin60 (talk) 17:47, 27 April 2017 (UTC) Cherie Robinson


 * There are several issues here. First of all, the Terms of Use require you to disclose that you are a paid contributor to Wikipedia; see WP:PAID for detail. You may also want to take a look at our guideline on conflicts of interest; writing about your supervisor on Wikipedia is not a good idea because it's difficult to do so with Wikipedia's best interests instead of your supervisor's best interests in mind.
 * The article does not show that Prof. Tso meets Wikipedia's standards ofnotability for academics. All references are Prof. Tso's own works, not independent sources discussing him; thus there is no independent assessment of Tso, his work or his impact in his field. Due to the lack of inline citations it's also totally unclear which of the references supports which part of the content (if any). For example, which of those references would I have to look up to confirm that "the State Administration of Foreign Expert Affairs of the People’s Republic of China and Premier Wen Jiabao bestowed on Professor Mark Tso a "Friendship Award" medal"? Since the most recent reference was published in 1999, a decade before that award was bestowed, the answer likely is "none of them", which shows there's a problem with the referencing of the article. Huon (talk) 18:19, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

Help me! Follow-up to Previous Session
Please help me with...

I can include a statement indicating myself as a paid employee of Dr. Mark OM Tso. However, I am not the writer of the content, I have uploaded the content for Dr. Tso. Dr. Tso is responsible for the text of his submitted biography to Wikipedia. The COI guidelines has left me confused. It is Dr. Tso's desire to submit his article to Wikipedia prior to his retirement. I am not the originator of his written article, Dr. Tso is.

CRobin60 (talk) 16:55, 2 May 2017 (UTC)
 * As an employee you have an inherent conflict of interest regardless of who is writing the content and will still need to disclose per WP:PAID. Please also request edits rather than creating them yourself as it will lessen the impact of having a COI. Subjects are not allowed to dictate what goes into an article and the content should be based on independent reliable coverage. CHRISSY MAD  ❯❯❯  ¯\_(ツ)_/¯  17:35, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

May 2017
Please do not remove content or templates from pages on Wikipedia, as you did to Mark O.M. Tso, without giving a valid reason for the removal in the edit summary. Your content removal does not appear to be constructive and has been reverted. If you only meant to make a test edit, please use the sandbox for that. Thank you. Dl2000 (talk) 01:31, 3 May 2017 (UTC)

Help me!
Please help me with... updating the links of verification to Dr. Mark OM Tso's academic works.

I am no longer an employee of Dr. Mark OM Tso.

The following are links to validate the many contributions of Dr. Mark OM Tso within the field of ophthalmology and pathology.

I am enclosing internet links on the contributions of Mark OM Tso. These links are in Chinese as his major work was done in the Far East. http://pkunews.pku.edu.cn/xwzh/2009-10/26/content_160492.htm

https://www.itsfun.com.tw/%E5%B1%B1%E6%9D%B1%E7%B4%85%E5%8D%81%E5%AD%97%E7%9C%BC%E7%A7%91%E9%86%AB%E9%99%A2/wiki-9449514-8283693

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mark_O.M._Tso

http://www.gzzoc.com/xwzx/zxxw/201301/t20130111_5024.html

http://med.wanfangdata.com.cn/Paper/Detail/PeriodicalPaper_zhydb200101001

http://puh3.net.cn/yk/zxjj/24611.shtml

I am also enclosing internet links of Mark OM Tso's contributions in International Council of Ophthalmology (ICO) represent over 250,000 ophthalmologists across the world.

https://www.icoph.org/site_search.html?cx=006932209847762897769%3Afqedgxt8bto&cof=FORID%3A10&ie=UTF-8&q=mark+om+tso&x=0&y=0

If additional information is needed, please advise. Thank you in advance.

CRobin60 (talk) 14:18, 20 June 2017 (UTC)


 * You may want to take a look at WP:Identifying reliable sources. We are looking for independent published sources such as newspapers or reputable magazines reporting on Prof. Tso in some detail. All the references you point out, (except Wikipedia; see WP:CIRCULAR for that) seem to be his own works or the websites of organizations he is affiliated with, not independent coverage. They don't even seem to agree with our article on Prof. Tso's name; I rather don't think any of the Chinese sources calls him "Mark". Huon (talk) 20:58, 20 June 2017 (UTC)