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3rd generation nest thermostat
It's a shame you skipped the review stage for your draft. There are several improvements it needs.
 * Have you looked at Nest Labs? Did you consider expanding Nest Labs?
 * The title is too specific. There's no need for a separate article for each generation of the thermostat. I'd suggest moving it to Nest Learning Thermostat. This title would encompass all generations and allow comparison of features from one generation to the next.
 * The 3rd Generation Thermostat can control your hot water tank - first & second person pronouns aren't part of encyclopedic language. Perhaps The 3rd Generation Thermostat can control the user's hot water tank
 * Inline references are needed. Please have a look at Help:Referencing for beginners, Help:Introduction to referencing (WM)/1, & Inline citation.

I'll also post the standard welcome message here which will point you at more help for beginners. Happy editing. Bazj (talk) 15:55, 2 December 2015 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Nest thermostat


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