User talk:CSCDerekLi

Health issues in athletics - grammar/spelling edits
I will be making a few spelling and grammar edits wherever necessary in Health issues in athletics https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CSCDerekLi/sandbox

pyschology -> psychology

They observed an increase in both disordered eating within young female athletes. These researchers found that exercising intensely while getting inadequate nutrition can lead to amenorrhoea, or irregular menstrual cycles, which in turn can lead to osteoporosis. -> They observed an increase in disordered eating within young female athletes and also found that exercising intensely while getting inadequate nutrition can lead to amenorrhoea, or irregular menstrual cycles, which in turn can lead to osteoporosis.

amenorrhea -> amenorrhoea

overexercising -> over exercising

a athelete's body's -> an athlete's body's

amenorrhea -> amenorrhoea

need for rest increases and her overall energy declines, causing her total body fat and estrogen levels to drop -> need for rest increases and overall energy declines, causing total body fat and estrogen levels to drop

Stress not only refers to physical stress, but can also refer to physical stress, which is simply exercise and activity, is beneficial for our bones, muscles, tendons, and ligaments, making them stronger and more functional. -> Exercise and activity, is beneficial for our bones, muscles, tendons, and ligaments, making them stronger and more functional.

loose -> lose

The most powerful of the androgen is testosterone -> The most powerful androgen is testosterone

By the start of high school, 53% of athletes will have already suffered a concussion. But -> By the start of high school, 53% of athletes will have already suffered a concussion but

concussion -> concussions

Warm ups -> Warm-ups

Over the past year, 48 youths died from sports injuries. -> In 2010 alone, 48 youths died from sports injuries.

CSCDerekLi (talk) 23:00, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

Sexless marriage - edits
I am proposing to make these following edits for the page on Sexless marriage.

A sexless marriage is a marriage in which little or no sexual activity occurs between the two spouses. -> A sexless marriage is a marriage in which there is little or no sexual activity or if a spouse feels there is not enough sex.

"The US National Health and Social Life Survey in 1994 (Laumann et al. 1994) found that 2 percent of the married respondents reported no sexual intimacy in the past year." has been deleted as it is outdated and also cannot be referenced.

Added a reference for: The definition of a nonsexual marriage is often broadened to include those where sexual intimacy occurs less than ten times per year.

chronic fatigue syndrome -> chronic fatigue syndrome

Sexual dysfunction or difficulty during any stage of the sexual act, including severe vaginismus or erectile dysfunction. Lack of sensations, desire or ability to achieve orgasm resulting as side effects from medication or illegal drugs. -> Sexual dysfunction or difficulty during any stage of the sexual act, including severe vaginismus or erectile dysfunction, can also reduce sexual frequency. There can also be a lack of sensations, desire or ability to achieve orgasm resulting as side effects from medication or illegal drugs.

passive aggressive -> passive-aggressive

It's usually the partner who behaves in a passive-aggressive way the one who blocks sexual intercourse as punishment for some imaginary or real slight received from the other. -> The partner who behaves in a passive-aggressive way can be the one who blocks sexual intercourse as punishment for some imaginary or real slight received from the other.

If both partners so desire, they can make a conscious decision to step up the frequency of sex and even to schedule times for sex, to kindly communicate with another in and outside of sex, or to play role-play games, and even use toys, practice "dirty talk", have "candle-lit dinners", look for unusual sex locations, watch erotic films, arrange weekends away, share fantasies and much more. -> There are various solutions to increase the frequency of sex within the marriage. Partners can make conscious decisions to schedule times for sex. They can kindly communicate with another during or outside of sex, consider role-play, use sex toys, or practice "dirty talk". They can create a more sexually welcoming environment by adding candles, playing an erotic film, and share personal fantasies.

CSCDerekLi (talk)

Failed suicide attempt - edits
I am updating outdated information in the "Criminalization of attempted suicide" subheading on Failed suicide attempt, also providing a new reference.

Outdated information:

In India, attempted suicide is an offense punishable under Section 309 of the Indian Penal Code. Section 309 reads thus: ''Attempt to commit suicide. "Whoever attempts to commit suicide and does any act towards the commission of such offence, shall be punished with simple imprisonment for a term which may extend to one year or with fine, or with both."

Updated information:

In India, a new mental health bill states that “Notwithstanding anything contained in Section 309 of the IPC, any person who attempts suicide shall be presumed, unless proved otherwise, to be suffering from mental illness at the time of the bid and shall not be liable to punishment". The Bill thus clarifies that the act of suicide and the mental health of the person committing the act are inseparably linked and have to be seen together and not in isolation.

CSCDerekLi (talk) 02:29, 10 March 2014 (UTC)

Chloe Kim
I propose to make an expansion on known biographical information for the stub article Chloe Kim.

Inserted an Infobox for Chloe Kim that includes date of birth, birthplace, "known for", home town, height, and weight.

Updated the opening paragraph, adding Chloe Kim's newest podium grab at the 2014 Burton US Open pipe.

Created a biography section.

Created a recent competition history section.

CSCDerekLi (talk) 03:31, 10 March 2014 (UTC)