User talk:CSRothwell/sandbox

I think the article contributions look very good so far. The facts are straightforward and there's no bias or argument which is good for Wikipedia. There is good information but I feel that a little more can be added, especially to the section about her being a land owner. The citations are good but maybe see what can also be added on the topic from a different source as well. Also more can be said about the family settling without Anne's consent. Overall it sounds really good, just more information can be added to bring it all together. SarahK86 (talk) 21:28, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

I think your contributions to the article are really interesting. Everything is clear and straightforward. To me it is just a little bit general, I feel like you could have added more details and evidence to support your arguments. For example, you say that she has had many problems with tenants and did not hesitate to file lawsuits? Was it a common practice at the time, even for male landowners? Did she have problems with her tenants because she was a women? Also you us twice the word "tenant" in a 6 word sentence so maybe juste replace the second one by "them". Maybe include a little bit of background to the husband and the family to highlight her rebellious personality. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Thomas.legrand (talk • contribs) 21:37, 11 April 2017 (UTC)