User talk:CSharpMajor7/Good Hope Jet

There a couple of punctuation errors throughout the article. I found it Very good other than that. Maybe add a little bit more to the second paragraph. Also, add a photo if possible.

Sean

Thanks for this version. I found it interesting to point out the variability of the current and the reasons behind it. Here are a few comments about possible improvements :

- I agree with Sean about an image. A map could be very intersting to better understand the geography of the current. Maybe use this map for instance.

- The structure could be improved with different cuts between the paragraphs. For instance : general presentation and history / hydrodynamics / ecological role. So all the hydrodynamic aspects are gathered in the 2nd part.

- I am not sure what conditionnal means in the "conditionnal flow variability" expression. Is it something you read?

- I would add a few links here and there to help peaple who don't know about oceanography. For instance "Its speed and output change frequently due to changes in wind speed and the offshore mesoscale eddy field."

All the best

Pierre-Jean Hidodu (talk) 15:44, 13 April 2021 (UTC)